BenTenn
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Im gonna start it though, listen to what i can.
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Did you say "I read an article recently..." referring to the article you wrote? Lol
Did you say "I read an article recently..." referring to the article you wrote? Lol
Thought I said wrote, to be honest. Meant to say wrote. Wasn't trying to make it weird.
Dbake- good breakdown of the class. Obviously, the mic was an issue as you said before. When you get that little issue corrected, it will be much better. Your intro still needs a little bit of work, but really good meat of discussion, no doubt. One suggestion I have, is to listen to popular radio hosts and take a page or two from them. If you make your statements more definitive, more confidently, it will make it even better! A lot of people that listen want to be told how they should feel about players/coaches/performances, etc. So, instead of saying phrases like "to be honest" or "in my opinion," state them more factually. It was really good thoughan. Just thought I'd give a little constructive criticism. Hell, I may even be wrong, but that was just something little I though of. Progressing well though bud!
Coach speak is strong here. (It's a procces )I really think a desktop on campus would fix the microphone issue. I'm gonna try it Monday when the library is open again.
The transitions were awful, too. Awful awful. I have an idea on how to improve the intro and transitions, for sure.
I do probably need to be a little more direct. However, I hate when talk-radio guys do that when you can tell they don't really know a roster or know a situation. So, I'm gonna try to get a little better at breaking down the game then sort of honing in on some direct predictions to stand by. Like, do a better job of separating the "summarizing what happened" from the "here is what I think!".... doing both, just making it more clear which one i'm doing in the moment, if that makes sense. It's a process. I definitely appreciate the feedback.
That is me saying "wrote" but I don't think it would hold up in court.
Maybe I heard it wrong. Lol
I thought an interesting idea for an article to write would be about the progression, and overall stay AJ has had at UT. He has been here for Dooley, Sal, being the only player on D who can tackle, highly criticized, almost left but stayed for CBJ, and now transitioning to a leader and coaching young guys. Could be a good little write up about his progression and experience being here
I think I'm gonna do my next article on "Guys we're too quick to forget" and write about AJ, Lane, Williams. Journey of those guys has been amazing and could have gone in so many worse directions.
Get Sarah Mitchell on. Live from the seat across from you