Braves Thread Podcast

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fair

 

[GreatWhiteNorth]

DBake, this one is twice as good as the first. Literally. The only suggestion I can make is to work on your closing a little. It's not bad by any means...just feels a little abrupt. Like it doesn't flow quite right.

I'm nitpicking you because I think that's probably what you want. I think your entry is excellent as-is...just want to give you as much input as possible.

 

[005]

DBake, this one is twice as good as the first. Literally. The only suggestion I can make is to work on your closing a little. It's not bad by any means...just feels a little abrupt. Like it doesn't flow quite right.

I'm nitpicking you because I think that's probably what you want. I think your entry is excellent as-is...just want to give you as much input as possible.

I actually agree with you... and I appreciate the feedback. I tried forever on the final paragraph... even moved around some stuff from other paragraphs. It's too short. It needs to walk the reader through my point again, about why it's the most important word for 2014.

I finally got it to "postable" and have a feeling i'll go back and change 3-4 things.

 

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The ending, especially the final line, feels cheap.

 

[GreatWhiteNorth]

Just needs fleshing out a bit more is all. And I agree...I don't like the closing line so much.

 

[wU-Tang Vol]

Lemme know what you think.

Check me for typos, Benji.

2014

One typo- it's Berrys, not Berries haha

 

[wU-Tang Vol]

Well thought out article though man. Really enjoyed it! Conveyed your point about how critical preparation is exceptionally well

 

[BenTenn]

Yall still doing the podcast tonight or nah?

 

[TBreazy]

Goin with or nah

 

[BenTenn]

Goin with or nah

Already off schedule. Smokey's Balls would have been on time.

 

[005]

That was an Or Nah. I didn't have time to study the script well, wanted to finish my article, and had to work on a couple other things... So it was me who called it off and moved it to tonight.

 

[BenTenn]

That was an Or Nah. I didn't have time to study the script well, wanted to finish my article, and had to work on a couple other things... So it was me who called it off and moved it to tonight.

Soooi...about that podcast?

 

[TBreazy]

lulz

 

[Scotty's Flat Top]

Soooi...about that podcast?

Lmao.

 

[wU-Tang Vol]

Tonight on the Big Orange Saturday Night Khalil Mckenzie is playing Kyle Oliver in Vol Trivia and then taking calls from the audience. Call in number (657) 383-0822 and here is the link to listen to the show 404 Error

Competition? ^

 

[NochNoch]

Competition? ^

It's no Smokey's Balls.

 

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danielpractice 08/09 by VolNation Power T Talk | Sports Podcasts

I'm RIDIN SOLO. I'M RIDIN SOLO SOLOOOOOOOOooooooo for 27 minutes.

I think the problem with my mic is my computer, to be honest. May have to do this ish on campus.

 

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ftr I know 'offensive line' is two words

 

[BenTenn]

Cant listen tonight, about to start a poker game, no headphones.

 

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Booooooooooooooooooo